Nerd-02's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[infection part1]

A very decent animation.

For what I was first expecting this was actually very good. The animation was alright and the guns and stuff looked good. You could work on your art a little more though. I've said this before a million times, I'm a horrible artist too, so what I do is either use sprites or trace. Stick figures are noobish, and so is not having a preloader. Newgrounds kindly offers a free preloader you can download! Use this until you figure out how to make your own.

Another thing is the audio. The sound effects seemed a little off to me, this can easily be fixed, but what really bugged me is the voice. I know you can't help it but you sound like...well 12. It really makes the entire animation look much more nooby if you can tell it's made by a 12 year old. There are many helpful people out there who will do voices for you for just a little credit. Don't be shy. Ask around, having a voice actor do the talking in your movies makes you seem professional.

Good luck with your next animations.

[Things that Remind Me]

Great Art!

The art in this movie was phenomenal. Whoever made it is very talented. The music fit well with the movie also. However, very short. Like it's literally 15 seconds long. Maybe you could have animated what ever happened during that black screen. I didn't really understand what happened there. It shows a gun, then a girl, then the guy's dead I think.

Also, the sound effects were pretty weird. Was that a gun shot? It sounded exactly like opening a can of soda.

Adding a bit more animation would make this movie way better.You made this in one morning? If you worked on it every morning for a week you could make a great 1 minute long flash.

[I Can Get Sexual Too!]

This made you laugh?

I think you may need some counseling. It was just screaming with random famous characters popping up for no apparent reason. Maybe they could be there to help the head crab zombie?

[Found flash]

Your feedback, sir

The animation was very smooth, and you're a better artist then me :P. The music fit with the whole theme of the animation too which is great.

Some things I didn't really like was that the animation jumped around a bit. Like at the start it's this monster dude burning then the whole background goes black suddenly and there's a red swirl.

Also, it didn't seem to have a story too it. It was just a bunch of animation. It would be better if you could somehow combine your animations to show a plot or something.

Finally, and I know it's hard for this type of animation, but some colour and an actual background could add to the animation.

Work on these points and you'll have a great animation on your hands.

indesisive responds:

Wow in depth review. Well thank you i will use your recommendations.

[Pokemon: Pee Red Version]

An amazing flash Lon, great work.

This was a great entertaining flash! The voice work was awesome, really made the flash what it is. The animation was also good with great lip syncing, and the audio was really fantastic too. Really an excellent movie all the way around.

However I have some things you could work on. Though the script had many funny references and jokes, a lot of them were very 'inside' and I could see lots of people missing them. I watched it the first time and found it hilarious so I sent it to my friend who didn't find it quite as funny since he needs to lurk moar. Also, a lot of the script is dry humor and it isn't really a 'laugh out loud' movie, it's entertaining, but it isn't comedy.

Another thing would be the time. It's a long movie, which I find fantastic, nowadays people don't have time to make 10 minute long movies, but that's probably because people don't have the time to watch 10 minute long movies. A movie maybe around 3-5 minutes in length packed with action and laughter would be just as good.

These are very minor issues to a majorly great animation. Fantastic work, worth the wait, but hopefully the next one isn't so far away =P.

P.S. Whoever made that bonus feature must be really handsom and inteligent. It added that 'je ne sais pas' to the movie.

OrangePylon responds:

As I've said before, I added so many references since it would be my last chance to. :P However I think that I did go overboard.

I don't see a 10-minute flash as a problem. People like the Nostalgia Critic can make videos 30 minutes long about one movie. However he does pump videos out every week.

You're right, whoever made the bonus for it must be incredibly attractive and smart and better than Nerd-02 at Smash Bros. However, the person who made the music for it is probably a dumbass.

[S.P.E.D Loop]

dont submit things like this.

You must know that this isn't a good flash. It's just an animation loop with a song in the background. Please don't submit "experiments" that are obviously bad.

This movie is bad because:
- it's a 2 second animation loop.
- there is nothing interesting in the animation.
- the song isn't even that good.

Do the opposite of that and it should be good.

[Comet VS Blood]

cool but unoriginal.

This flash was really well done. Had awesome sound effects and the animation was pretty good. However it's not original at all. There are sooooooo many of these animations. If you're going to make one, maybe come up with a story? Just do something to make it original.

A random fighting animation with sprites of sonic are a dime a dozen. Make it more original.

pfcc15 responds:

well i m just testing things out then ill add in everything else

[Sonic Vs Mario Episode 1]

good, but done before.

The animation and music were great, the fighting was entertaining too, the story was even pretty good. Only problem I had with it was that this kinda thing has been done before. Wasn't there like a 10 part series EXACTLY like this? Maybe try some different characters?

[Your Pokemon]

short and unsatisfying.

I've heard that before :(

Anyways I liked it...but I wanted more. It started off good and I was like "hey this is kinda cool :D" then the guy goes "never!" and it's done. I was like ":*("

So defiantly keep doing what you're doing, just longer please! :P, oh and maybe a background of some sorts?