Score: 7

"I really liked it."

submission: Sad Dave

date: July 8, 2009

This was a great animation. The graphics were really good, though I'm not sure if you took them from somewhere or made them yourself. Either way they're still great. I also loved the audio, it really went with the theme. Most of all the intro was fantastic.

The only thing that I could say to improve this would be to add buttons next to the speech bubbles so people can read at their own pace and possibly make a longer series out of this.

Score: 1

"Could have went further."

submission: Slappy Goes To The 40s

date: July 7, 2009

I actually liked the animation, art, and audio. What I didn't like is that it's a 5 second loop. You could have at least carried on the conversation or something. If you were to add more of a story element to this and more animation it would be a decent animation.

Score: 3

"Not very funny."

submission: ROFL LOL (Misheard)

date: July 6, 2009

First of all you didn't even credit the song! It's "Haunted" by Disturbed. You really should have said that, I had to go look it up myself.

The animation was...well there wasn't much animation, but the rest of the misheard lyrics are like that to so this is expected.

The problem I have with this is that your misheard lyrics aren't really that funny..."dumb worm and I've met Danish or my." The only parts I liked were the ROFL LOL part and that slow part where you pushed all the words close together. But for the rest of the 4 minutes and 30 seconds I was pretty bored.

If you plan on making more misheard lyrics, try to find a song where it is actually hard to understand the lyrics. Like others have said, I can understand these lyrics fine. That's probably why it was hard to make it funny.

Score: 1

"Overrated"

submission: WKUK Russian Roulette

date: July 6, 2009

You took a comedy sketch from "The Whitest Kids You Know" and animated some stick figures on a white background. The animation and lip syncing was well done, but the entire audio was, well, stolen. It's not yours.

Yes, it's very funny, but you didn't make it up. You just animated some stick figures to it. So for me, getting front page and #10 all time top scoring is a bit much. I mean you did only pass with a daily 4th. That seems fair. To me it seems like when it went on the front page everyone voted high just because it was on the front page.

But that's just Newgrounds. This flash was entertaining only because of the audio, not the animation. That's why I gave it a low score, and why I think it's overrated.

Score: 3

"Educational and Boring."

submission: World War 2 (Part 1)

date: July 6, 2009

I found this pretty boring. The sound effects, animation, and art were all well done, but watching countries turn different colours didn't excite me. Also, why did this need to be split into two parts? You could have had the whole thing in one flash.

Something that would make it a bit less boring is if there was a a time line you could click and drag on the bottom, or at the very least a fast forward button.

Score: 1

"How to fix buttons"

submission: Castle Crashers Dress-Up

date: July 5, 2009

You have it set up wrong. On the main time line you have different frames for all the different colours. I know this because if I right click and press "play" the guy changes colours. The guy should be a movie clip (Be sure to click on the movie clip of the guy, go to properties and give it a name, "guy" is fine.) and if you double click him you'll go into his time line. This is where you add all the frames for different colours.

Then, click on a frame and go to properties and name it like "green" or something. Then for the green button add this code:

on(Press){
_root.guy.gotoAndStop("green");
}

This way the main time line only has one frame making it way more organized, and you'll get a feel for animating inside movie clips. If you don't understand this look up a tutorial or post on the forum.

Score: 3

"I think you have some problems..."

submission: Allan Fan Fiction Blowjob

date: July 5, 2009

Let me get this straight, you read this comic online and liked it, so you animated some of the characters having sex? You made your account today and named it "allanfan69". I think your a bit obsessed.

Other then that the art was good and similar to the comic actually. Your animation was also very smooth and well done. Though you could have probably animated some of the actual comics instead of make a fan fiction sex scene.

If you plan on making any more animations about this comic that's what I would suggest doing. Though make sure you always credit the creator of the comic so you don't get in trouble. Also, some nice background music would be great.

Score: 0

"Bad"

submission: Short : OMFG

date: July 4, 2009

You didn't make the music and you didn't make the sprites. So what did you make? You made a spinning black and gray background, took the sprites, put them on the background and mad them spin, typed "lol", and that's it.

There is no story at all. It's just madness sprites spinning in circles. Very poor.

Score: 0

"Not good."

submission: Madness : Carness

date: July 4, 2009

There is very little actual animation in this movie. I'm under the impression you have everything on it's own layer in the main time line. There wasn't any story to this movie either. There's a guy, he sees another guy, he then shoots him. The end.

Movies need animation and story.

Score: 1

"ugh..."

submission: Sasuke - Barbie Girl

date: July 4, 2009

try doing a whole song instead of just 20 seconds of two songs on the same day...