Score: 10

"DAMN..."

submission: Operation: Warehouse

date: April 29, 2008

That was amazing. Great animation, great audio, and best of all great humor :P I'm supposed to give you advice on how to improve it here, but I don't think you can. I guess just make another one :P Great work man.

Score: 1

"Me too"

submission: Flight Box

date: April 29, 2008

sept it was in my chair watching this. You could have put in a simple animation like him flying around or something. Love the art and stuff though. Just try adding a story.

Score: 7

"Very nice,"

submission: Detroit Slum Lord

date: April 28, 2008

but needs instructions. I was confused :S, oh and some audio.

Score: 5

"Very nice animation,"

submission: God of waR (the real one)

date: April 28, 2008

but i found it really short. I know you said it is a test run but there is an Alpha test section on this site. You could submit tests there from now on. But other then that it's looking sexy :P

Score: 4

"Great job"

submission: The Pong

date: April 13, 2008

But Pong has been done to death. Do a search for 'Pong' on Newgrounds and I'm sure you'll get like 10,000 hits. If you want your game to stand out you need to make it original. As a fellow game developer I understand how hard it is to make fun, original games. And making clones of previous games is a great way to start off but if you want to start getting them up there in the scores you'll need to eventually make your own game. As far as improving this one you can add music from the audio portal, maybe add another ball, a background, but I'm pretty sure no matter what you do it will always be scrutinized for having 'Pong' in the title. Good luck on future games and have fun =)

Score: 0

"do not want"

submission: KIAT B-Day Flash Bash

date: April 13, 2008

Didn't like this, probably because its a couple of pictures rotating slightly over and over while music plays. Maybe you can make a flash with a story?

Score: 4

"Longer"

submission: do u have anal disease?

date: April 13, 2008

Needs to be a longer, but great audio and art. Everything else seems to be well done. Just make it longer and maybe a bit more of a story. Like the doctor and the guys have a big fight scene or something.

Score: 1

"not funny"

submission: LL- Turd Lock is born

date: March 5, 2008

I didn't find this funny. You could have made it a lot longer and more funny and maybe i would have liked it, but submitting stuff like this tarnishes the reputation of the lock legion.

Score: 7

"This is awesome!!"

submission: Link : This is Spartan V2

date: September 29, 2007

This is PASSSABLE!!!!!

Score: 10

"lololololololololololololololololololol"

submission: Numa Numa Dance

date: September 29, 2007

I LOVE YOU GARY!!!!